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[http://i.imgur.com/n7CiW.jpg|Fansub Translating in a Nutshell]
 
[http://i.imgur.com/n7CiW.jpg|Fansub Translating in a Nutshell]
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===Translating: How do you do it?===
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Having covered the previous section on what the point of translating and how to do it well was, I'll cover the process in which I translate in this section.
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Translating, like many things, is an art. There is a lot of nuances and minutia that goes into translating words that many people who "translate" unfortunately do not grasp. When translating, there are a few overarching steps that go into doing the translation. Generally, doing this on a sentence-by-sentence basis is sufficient, but for more complex passages it may be beneficial to do this by paragraphs so as to work in better nuances and flow.
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#Reading or listening for yourself and understanding the content
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#Identify the key points of the sentence. These could include such things as subject, verbs, adjectives and other words that have importance in the meaning of the sentence. Generally, when identifying these and storing them in your head or whatever, try to be as verbose as possible. For me, I find it easier to identify these points and make them verbose in English. An important distinction here is that you aren't really "translating" the text for a reader. Rather, you're "describing" the translation to yourself. The wording you come up with this section should feel more like a description of the text rather than a translation you would provide someone.
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#If you have already "translated" the meaning via the previous step in a verbose manner, try reforming the sentence from scratch in a shorter and more natural feel. I'm sure that everyone has paraphrased text before. What do you do when paraphrasing? You're newly constructing a sentence that has the general information based on importance in a new and shorter set of words that still feel like natural English. This step is just like paraphrasing.
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#*The key point in this step is the '''natural''' feel of the sentence that will be constructed. The translation must flow in the new language and the only way you can ensure that is for you, assuming you are a native-level speaker, to be able to naturally formulate the sentence on your own.
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#Review the sentence you have just created and work on wording and flow. This part is less "translating" and more grammatical checks, though it is still as important a part in the grand scheme of translating.
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Let's break the steps down with an example.
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====Understanding the Content====
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Let's take for example the original Japanese description accompanying the [[Ryuusei]]
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*艦攻と艦爆を統合した先進的な"急降下爆撃可能な雷撃機"、それが「流星」です。<br>発動機不調と重量過大に悩みながらも、開発に成功。高い性能を誇る最新鋭の艦上攻撃機です。<br>先進的な性能を体現した独特のフォルムも魅力的な本機、ぜひ、新型艦戦「烈風」と共に空母に積んであげてくださいね。
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For this step, there isn't much to explain on my end. Just read the paragraph and make sure you understand what it means. Obviously, this step and this guide assumes you can read Japanese on a semi-fluent level.
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====Identifying the Key Points====
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Let's break the paragraph down to sentences. Here's the first one
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*艦攻と艦爆を統合した先進的な"急降下爆撃可能な雷撃機"、それが「流星」です。
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This sentence's key points lie in the first half of the sentence. This is the description of what the "ryuusei" is. The key in this sentence is the description, or that the aircraft has a combined dive-bombing and fighter capability that have been augmented onto the original torpedo-bombing purposes.
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*発動機不調と重量過大に悩みながらも、開発に成功。
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Here's the second sentence. The point here is that even though the aircraft experienced initial issues, presumably during development, with its weight and engines, it still managed to come out on the other end as a completed craft.
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*高い性能を誇る最新鋭の艦上攻撃機です。
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This sentence simply states that this carrier-based aircraft boasts a high performance.
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The final sentence is
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*先進的な性能を体現した独特のフォルムも魅力的な本機、ぜひ、新型艦戦「烈風」と共に空母に積んであげてくださいね。
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This sentence has two components. The first part is a descriptor of the Ryuusei, or that the aircraft has both a distinctive and elegant form that marks and boasts its record of high-performance. The second part states that the player should likely equip the Ryuusei alongside the Reppuu as both are a type of "pinnacle" of high-performance aircraft.
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One point I will make here is my translation of 魅力 as "elegant". The reason I did this is because when describing a "beautiful, charming, glamorous or appealing" aircraft, the word people will likely use to compliment the aesthetic and implied goodness of said aircraft will be "elegant". Think of it this way. Have you ever heard someone say "charming" aircraft? Probably not. "Beautiful" aircraft? Maybe. "Glamorous" aircraft? I myself have never heard this. "Appealing" aircraft is something I've heard but it has a different connotation. However, "elegant aircraft" is something I hear quite often when describing military crafts in general. As such, I decided that the use of "elegant" here is more appropriate since it's a more common adjective describing aircraft.
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====Paraphrase the Verbose Translations====
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So let's get the four sections together. What does this piece of text imply?
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The Ryuusei is an aircraft that has a combined dive-bombing and fighter capability that has been augmented onto the original torpedo-bombing purposes. This craft experienced many issues with development due to its weight and engine problems. Yet, this craft still managed to come out the other end of R&D with pride as a high-performance craft. Finally, the aircraft boasts a distinct and elegant form that symbolizes its success as an attack aircraft. Should the player be given the chance, it is recommended to equip it alongside the Reppuu.
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So what we have right now is quite the mouthful. Let's rework it down.
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The Ryuusei is a versatile attack aircraft, having both the ability to be a fighter and dive-bomber on top of its torpedo-bombing capabilities. Though plagued by engine and weight issues during development, it managed to succeed as a high-performance aircraft. With its distinctly elegant silhouette being a symbol of the Ryuusei's superior performance, equipping it on your carrier alongside the Reppuu is recommended.
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This is much better in terms of flow and succinctness. However, it can probably use some rewording and reorganizing to make it flow better.
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====Rewording and Editing====
     
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