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Somehow one letter managed to make that translation really awkward.
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|え。。。ここで一句、クリスマス・提督と一緒に・暮らします。なんちゃって!面白くない?ない??
 
|え。。。ここで一句、クリスマス・提督と一緒に・暮らします。なんちゃって!面白くない?ない??
|Now, I'll be reciting a haiku. Christmas seasons come. With my dear previous Admiral, I shall reside with. Was that not good? No??
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|Now, I'll be reciting a haiku. Christmas seasons come. With my dear precious Admiral, I shall reside with. Was that not good? No??
 
|Note: The original Japanese is 5-8-5 and not 5-7-5.
 
|Note: The original Japanese is 5-8-5 and not 5-7-5.
 
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