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===API link===
 
===API link===
Method to access the game without having to access [http://www.dmm.com/ DMM]. see [[Tutorial: Proxy Connection#Play_without_VPN.2FProxy|Play without VPN/Proxy]]
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Method to play the game without having to access the official [http://www.dmm.com/ DMM] website. See [[Tutorial: Proxy Connection#Play_without_VPN.2FProxy|Play without VPN/Proxy]] for detailed information.
    
===Crossing the T===
 
===Crossing the T===
Classic naval strategy in which a line of warships crossed in front of a line of enemy ships, allowing the crossing line to bring all their guns to bear while receiving fire from only the forward guns of the enemy.
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Classic naval strategy in which a line of warships cross in front of a line formation of enemy ships, allowing the crossing line to bring all their guns to bear while receiving fire from only the forward guns of the enemy.
    
===Docking===
 
===Docking===
 
''See [[Docking]] for complete information.''
 
''See [[Docking]] for complete information.''
Place to repair your ship. Also known as repair '''bath'''. Use '''bucket''' (高速修復材) for instant repair.
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Place to repair your ship. Also known as repair '''bath'''. Use the '''bucket''' (高速修復材) for instant repair.
    
===Expedition===
 
===Expedition===
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===Fatigue===
 
===Fatigue===
''See [[Tutorial: FAQ#Alright.2C_I_built_my_ship.2C_kicked_some_ass_and_I_noticed_the_orange_faces._What_gives.3F|''Alright, I built my ship, kicked some ass and I noticed the orange faces. What gives?'']].''<br />
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''See [[Tutorial: FAQ#Alright, I built my ship, kicked some ass and I noticed the orange faces. What gives?|''Alright, I built my ship, kicked some ass and I noticed the orange faces. What gives?'']].''<br />
Shows as orange/sad faces if the ships are too fatigued. Rest them for 15 minutes or so if it happens.
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orange/sad faces are displayed next to the ship icon if they are too fatigued. Rest them for 15 minutes or so if it happens.
 
*Return to base: +15
 
*Return to base: +15
 
*Going to night battle: +3
 
*Going to night battle: +3
    
===Food supply ship Mamiya===
 
===Food supply ship Mamiya===
Remove any fatigue on your fleet. if you don't use it, it could function as fatigue indicator. See [[wikipedia:Japanese food supply ship Mamiya|here for the wikipedia entry]].
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Remove any fatigue on your fleet. If you don't use it, it could function as a fatigue indicator. See [[wikipedia:Japanese food supply ship Mamiya|here for the Wikipedia entry]].
    
===Modernization===
 
===Modernization===
''see [[Modernization]]. for complete information''<br />
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''See [[Modernization]] for complete information.''<br />
Process of using unused ships to increase stats(Firepower, AA, Torpedo, Armor) of a single ship. Also known as Merging.
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Process of using unused ships to increase stats (Firepower, AA, Torpedo, Armor) of a single ship. Also known as Merging.
    
===Naval Exercise===
 
===Naval Exercise===
PVP-like battle with no risk of repair and sinking, only cost you fuel, ammo and bauxite. Opponent teams update in real-time, but there is no simultaneous play.
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PVP-like battle with no risk of repair and sinking, and only costs the player fuel, ammo and bauxite. Opponent teams update in real-time, but there is no simultaneous play.
 
*New opponent list refreshed at 03:00 and 15:00 JST
 
*New opponent list refreshed at 03:00 and 15:00 JST
    
===Phases of Battle===
 
===Phases of Battle===
 
*Day Battle
 
*Day Battle
*#Reconnaissance (Stat boost, avoid being [[#Crossing_the_T|T-crossed]])
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*#Reconnaissance (Stat boost, avoid being [[#Crossing the T|T-crossed]])
 
*#Initial airstrike (opening bombing, air superiority)
 
*#Initial airstrike (opening bombing, air superiority)
 
*#Support fleet attack
 
*#Support fleet attack
*#Opening/initial torpedo strike (see [[#Midget_Submarine|Type A Ko-hyoteki (甲標的甲型)]])
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*#Opening/initial torpedo strike (see [[#Midget Submarine|Type A Ko-hyoteki (甲標的甲型)]])
 
*#Shelling/artillery phase (regular airstrike happens here)
 
*#Shelling/artillery phase (regular airstrike happens here)
 
*#Post-battle torpedo strike
 
*#Post-battle torpedo strike
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===Sparkle===
 
===Sparkle===
See [[Tutorial: FAQ#My_ship_is_sparkling.2Fglittering.21|''My ship is sparkling/glittering!'']].
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See [[Tutorial: FAQ#My ship is sparkling.2Fglittering.21|''My ship is sparkling/glittering!'']].
    
===Tracer-fire effect===
 
===Tracer-fire effect===
This occurs when a ship fires any equipped machineguns to defend itself, reducing incoming damage from enemy bombers.  Your lead ship will always do this by default, even without any anti-air stat (will shoot down nothing in that case).
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This occurs when a ship fires any equipped machineguns to defend itself, reducing incoming damage from enemy bombers. Your lead ship will always do this by default, even without any anti-air stat (will shoot down nothing in that case).
    
==Equipment==
 
==Equipment==
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