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==Introduction==
 
==Introduction==
複葉非全金属製の旧世代機でありながら、高い信頼性と運用性を誇る、<br>メカジキの名を持つ紅茶の国の艦上攻撃機。<br>旧式ながら赫々たる戦果をおさめた傑作機、その水上機型を強化改修、<br>S9 Ospreyの後継機として輸出導入するif多用途作戦水上機、その初期モデルです。
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複葉非全金属製の旧世代機でありながら、高い信頼性と運用性を誇る、メカジキの名を持つ紅茶の国の艦上攻撃機。<br>旧式ながら赫々たる戦果をおさめた傑作機、その水上機型を強化改修、S9 Ospreyの後継機として輸出導入するif多用途作戦水上機、その初期モデルです。
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''The Swordfish is a seaplane from the Country of Tea. Even though it is an old model, this non-metal biplane has excellent reliability and operability.<br>This masterwork has a magnificent service record.<br>This multirole seaplane is an early what-if model that has been improved for export to replace the S9 Osprey.
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''The Swordfish is a seaplane from the country of tea, and even though it is an old model, this non-metal biplane has excellent reliability and operability.<br>This masterwork has a magnificent service record, with this multirole seaplane being an early what-if model that has been improved for export to replace the S9 Osprey.
    
==Mechanics==
 
==Mechanics==
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