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The first sentence essentially read "equipment can be given improvements and, eventually, be given upgraded..."; I added "be" after the comma to make the sentence parallel.
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This system is made for [[Akashi]] and Akashi Kai. Now if you have her as your secretary ship, you will be able to use Akashi's Improvement Arsenal.
 
This system is made for [[Akashi]] and Akashi Kai. Now if you have her as your secretary ship, you will be able to use Akashi's Improvement Arsenal.
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By using Improvement Material, development material and resources, equipment can be given improvements and eventually, upgraded into a better equipment. Equipment that can be improved depends on the day of the week and the ship in the second slot.
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By using Improvement Material, development material and resources, equipment can be given improvements and eventually, be upgraded into a better equipment. Equipment that can be improved depends on the day of the week and the ship in the second slot.
     
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