Tadoritsuita
Joined 18 April 2015
Native English speaker. Student of Japanese. Tragically at what would be JA-1 on a userbox template... or now that I think about it, I have a "sizable vocabulary" and a "good understanding of grammar" (which comes from having read through the first two Dictionaries of Japanese Grammar like they're textbooks), so maybe I'd be JA-2. Would probably get blown out by JLPT1 if I tried. 日本語の話はぜんぜん足りないからです。
If I made an edit to your translation you didn't like, revert it. IF my translation was bad, change it. Go forth with my blessing.