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開戦から珊瑚海海戦まで「瑞鶴」の上空を護りました。
 
開戦から珊瑚海海戦まで「瑞鶴」の上空を護りました。
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A carrier-based squadron equipped with the Type 21 Zero Fighter and commanded by the great dogfighting expert, Iwamoto.  
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Commanded by squadron commander Iwamoto, the great dogfighting expert, a carrier-based squadron equipped with the Type 21 Zero Fighter.
 
The excellent combat ability and long range of the zero fighter combined with the skills of the pilots results in overwhelming strength.
 
The excellent combat ability and long range of the zero fighter combined with the skills of the pilots results in overwhelming strength.
 
Protecting the skies above Zuikaku during the Battle of the Coral Sea.
 
Protecting the skies above Zuikaku during the Battle of the Coral Sea.
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