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|Library = 陽炎型十番艦の時津風だよ。<br>雪風、初風、天津風とで第十六駆逐隊を編成、仲良く色々と頑張ったんだよ。二水戦にもいたんだよ、ほんとほんと。でも、制海権の無い海は…ちょっと嫌かなーって。
 
|Library = 陽炎型十番艦の時津風だよ。<br>雪風、初風、天津風とで第十六駆逐隊を編成、仲良く色々と頑張ったんだよ。二水戦にもいたんだよ、ほんとほんと。でも、制海権の無い海は…ちょっと嫌かなーって。
 
|EN0 = 10th Kagerou-class Destroyer, Tokitsukaze.
 
|EN0 = 10th Kagerou-class Destroyer, Tokitsukaze.
I worked hard in the 16th Destroyer Division with my friends Yukikaze, Hatsukaze, and Amatsukaze. I was also in the 2nd Torpedo Squadron you know, really, really.  But...an uncontrolled sea seems...kinda unpleasant.
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I worked hard in the 16th Destroyer Division with my friends Yukikaze, Hatsukaze, and Amatsukaze. I was also in the 2nd Torpedo Squadron you know, really, really.  But... an uncontrolled sea seems... kinda unpleasant.
 
|Note0 = The previous translation is wrong. Tokitsukaze was NOT in two Destroyer Divisions, she was in 2nd Torpedo Squadron which the 16th Destroyer Division was a part of.
 
|Note0 = The previous translation is wrong. Tokitsukaze was NOT in two Destroyer Divisions, she was in 2nd Torpedo Squadron which the 16th Destroyer Division was a part of.
 
|秘書クリック会話① = この風、どうかなぁ?
 
|秘書クリック会話① = この風、どうかなぁ?
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