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| Note3=
 
| Note3=
 
| 秘書クリック会話③=あまり艤装には触らないでもらいたいものだな (as Nagato) / ん、なっ…い、いや、き、嫌いでは…ない。(as Nagato Kai)
 
| 秘書クリック会話③=あまり艤装には触らないでもらいたいものだな (as Nagato) / ん、なっ…い、いや、き、嫌いでは…ない。(as Nagato Kai)
| EN4=I would prefer that you don't touch my equipment excessively. (as Nagato) / W-wha, n-no, I-I... don't hate it. (as Nagato Kai)
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| EN4=I would prefer that you don't touch my equipment excessively. (as Nagato) / W-wha, n-no, I-I don't... hate it. (as Nagato Kai)
 
| Note4=(All of the Nagato's weapons, save the main cannon, were removed before the end of the war).
 
| Note4=(All of the Nagato's weapons, save the main cannon, were removed before the end of the war).
 
| 秘書放置時=ん?なに?別に時間を持て余しているわけではないぞ。ああそうだ、忙しいな。
 
| 秘書放置時=ん?なに?別に時間を持て余しているわけではないぞ。ああそうだ、忙しいな。
| EN4a=Hm? What? It's not like I have too much time to spend. Yes, that's right. I'm busy.
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| EN4a=Hm? What? It's not like I have loads of free time. Yes, that's right. I'm busy.
| Note4a=(New idle line. Could be phrased better, could use a bit of correction.)
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| Note4a=She was treasured during WW2 as the IJN flagship.
She was treasured during WW2 as the IJN flagship.
   
| 戦績表示時=司令部から連絡だ
 
| 戦績表示時=司令部から連絡だ
| EN5=Headquarters have sent a message.
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| EN5=Headquarters has sent a message.
 
| Note5=
 
| Note5=
 
| 編成選択時=戦艦長門、出撃する!
 
| 編成選択時=戦艦長門、出撃する!
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| EN10=Some maintenance is essential.
 
| EN10=Some maintenance is essential.
 
| Note10=
 
| Note10=
| EN11=It is desirable to go for final fleet battle with perfect condition.
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| EN11=One should be in perfect condition for the final fleet battle.
 
| Note11=
 
| Note11=
 
| 建造時=新たな仲間が進水したようだ。楽しみだな
 
| 建造時=新たな仲間が進水したようだ。楽しみだな
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