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The first sentence essentially read "equipment can be given improvements and, eventually, be given upgraded..."; I added "be" after the comma to make the sentence parallel.
This system is made for [[Akashi]] and Akashi Kai. Now if you have her as your secretary ship, you will be able to use Akashi's Improvement Arsenal.
This system is made for [[Akashi]] and Akashi Kai. Now if you have her as your secretary ship, you will be able to use Akashi's Improvement Arsenal.
By using Improvement Material, development material and resources, equipment can be given improvements and eventually, upgraded into a better equipment. Equipment that can be improved depends on the day of the week and the ship in the second slot.
By using Improvement Material, development material and resources, equipment can be given improvements and eventually, be upgraded into a better equipment. Equipment that can be improved depends on the day of the week and the ship in the second slot.